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Shudder

likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Saw a blind man feel his way
Into the camera shop today
Reminded me of my wants and needs
I mean, I can see the record shop
Right down the street...

Maybe he just pauses and shoots when it
Feels right
Capturing everything we miss.

How would he know?

That smile with the sun on his face?

He knows.
Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I found this very touching, likepilateihaveadog--beautiful!!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    This isn't my style, but it has a lot of potential. Keep going with it, feel around in the dark so to speak, and see where it takes you. Nicely done so far.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    likepilateihaveadog wrote:
    Saw a blind man feel his way
    Into the camera shop today
    Reminded me of my wants and needs
    I mean, I can see the record shop
    Right down the street...

    Maybe he just pauses and shoots when it
    Feels right
    Capturing everything we miss.

    How would he know?

    That smile with the sun on his face?

    He knows.
    AMAZING.GOOD STYLE TO ME,I'M NOT ONE TO PUT IT DOWN.
    GOOD FORM.GOOD CONTENT THAT I LIKE/ENJOY TO READ.
    U DA BOMB.:)

    I JUST TOOK ALOT OF PHOTOS AT THE SHORE THE OTHER DAY,
    CAN RELATE....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    This isn't my style, but it has a lot of potential. Keep going with it, feel around in the dark so to speak, and see where it takes you. Nicely done so far.
    yeah...I know. I like to do brain droppings, just fill up the notebook.
    And then every once in a while sit down, sift through what I have a piece it together.
    I'm in a brain droppings stage...
    which means lots of contrived, poor ryhming.
    Poor phrasing.

    But thanks for the comments, all.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
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