Where It Is

SKasak44SKasak44 Posts: 67
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i have nothing better to do so i'll just make up a poem

this is where i draw the line
this is where i pay for the crime
this is where my dreams may fall
this is where i lost it all
this is where my love will flourish
this is where my child will nourish
this is where i count the days
this is where i count the ways
this is where i burst into flames
this is where my mind plays games
this is where i chase the dames
this is where the poem ends
if you liked it tell your friends


can anyone guess where it is?
"I cant hear you, but i feel the things you say"

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  • pearl jam message pit???





    :)
    ~all is full of love~
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    Waiting room of maternity ward?
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    TV Land?
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    The peach part of a new 20 dollar bill?
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  • Originally posted by Fortunate Sean
    i have nothing better to do so i'll just make up a poem

    this is where i draw the line
    this is where i pay for the crime
    this is where my dreams may fall
    this is where i lost it all
    this is where my love will flourish
    this is where my child will nourish
    this is where i count the days
    this is where i count the ways
    this is where i burst into flames
    this is where my mind plays games
    this is where i chase the dames
    this is where the poem ends
    if you liked it tell your friends


    can anyone guess where it is?

    you heart?
  • keep guessing :)
    "I cant hear you, but i feel the things you say"

  • Animal?
    Vegetable?
    Mineral?
    Noun?
    Person?
    Title?
    Before & After?
  • Jail?
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