Overblown

SKasak44SKasak44 Posts: 67
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wasted away at night again I dont know if I can keep up the smile charade anymore
Somehow I went from flying high to a nosedive which leads me to where I now lie upon the floor
Every day seems to be the same old thing and it just building up what I have inside
I just wanted a way to open your eyes, I failed but please could you touch me to let me know that I'm alive?

I'm overblown. Should have known. Your heart was never mine to own.
You and me. Not to be. But it didn't have to be for all eyes to see.

I knew when you said you'd drop a line it was a lie because it wasnt any different than before
But darling dear for you I fear because you won't know what its like until the space between us gathers even more
You need me more than you, it shows and I don't want to trot at rock bottom any longer
Me and you are one but now were half so only together can we make ourselves stronger

I'm overblown. Should have known. Your heart was never mine to own.
You and me. Not to be. But it didn't have to be for all eyes to see.
"I cant hear you, but i feel the things you say"

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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    ohhhh!!!!

    Fortunate Sean, I really like this.

    So much raw emotion.

    Sadness mixed with cold hope and loss..

    beautiful work.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Mr. Sean are you in love with a girl who is giving you the cold shoulder? ;) You have been peppering us with smitten love for the last week or so. I think you have been biten. Good for you. Send a couple of these poems her way and something special might happen.
    You've changed your place in this world!
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