If I took my clothes off

babysistermamababysistermama Posts: 35
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
If I took my clothes off
Would you stay until I’m done?
Would you try to imagine me as your true love?
Would you make believe that I was the one?

If I left them on
Could I keep your interest?
Would you listen to me go on and on?
About my life
What I like
What I’ve done

Right now I seem perfect to you
How long before you try to change that?
Another year?
Another month?
Maybe this is why I’ve been single so long

So what if I go into detail?
About how I lived
About my fancies
My idiosyncrasies

Change me now while you have the chance
My esteem is low
You’ve taught me that
I’ll finish last

So if I took my clothes off
Would I be put together better?
If I masturbated for you
Would I be like no other?

I know that this is only our first date
We’re just on the salad
You came and got me at ½ past eight
I can’t seem to forgive you
You were late

I’m all dressed up
And I’m wondering why
You’re not even my type of guy

I’m thinking that I’m not a hundred percent
I’m not well
A little sick
But still I wonder
How big is your dick?
Love is for the the lonely
Money for the poor
Hate is for the insecure
War is for the weak
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    LOL!

    (Those last two lines are surprising.)
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i'm really glad that you decided to post your poems here. they really are so honest and so open. :)
  • SoLATisASoLATisA Posts: 215
    wait... wait... wait.... so size DOES matter?

    shit
  • a great big mountainous pile of spent bone lie to left
    like the side plate at Chili's...
    all you can eat
    just $8.99
    and you're left
    with nothing but an urge to puke and
    a great big mountainous pile of spent effort lying
    in the pit of you
    of the pit of you
    that you can take out if you like




    (:
    ~all is full of love~
  • Let's fuck
    Let's fix
    Let's fight
    Hurry up before I miss my flight
    I want you to make sure that you'er perfect for me
    Who are you again?
    Can I see some I.D?
    This bathroom stall is so romanitic!
    Suck your dick?
    No!
    I'll smear my lipstick
    This seems like a scene from a porn.....
    I wonder if my dinner comes with corn?
    Bend me over
    Slide it in with ease
    Does this make me a total sleeze?
    I want what I want
    When I want it
    How I want it
    With whom I choose
    I'm all about you baby!!!
    Wow!
    I love my shoes
    Love is for the the lonely
    Money for the poor
    Hate is for the insecure
    War is for the weak
  • yuck

    this thread is not what pearl jam is about
    we are out to save the world

    so mattedjeffmikestoneget behind me when i say
    we dont want this kind of work in the forum here

    okay heres a poem

    love is a rainbow
    before the rain
    after the pain
    love is the way

    jump in lets paint
    swirling colors
    the milky way
    love is the way

    we can do it
    no need to fight
    we can do it
    lets turn on the lights

    this is for
  • Originally posted by loveandrew-wood
    yuck

    this thread is not what pearl jam is about
    we are out to save the world

    so mattedjeffmikestoneget behind me when i say
    we dont want this kind of work in the forum here

    okay heres a poem

    love is a rainbow
    before the rain
    after the pain
    love is the way

    jump in lets paint
    swirling colors
    the milky way
    love is the way

    we can do it
    no need to fight
    we can do it
    lets turn on the lights

    this is for
    YUCK?
    thoughts on a page
    turned inside out
    you can judge it if you want to
    without a doubt
    my struggles through this life
    just thoughts in my head
    put down in here
    my honesty insults you
    Pearl Jam makes me dream to be me
    in whatever facet that maybe
    so i'm glad that you have people to back you
    gang up on me
    go ahead
    i dare you
    the world needs saving
    you'er right
    that's true
    but maybe you should take a look at you
    just here to say what's on my mind
    i hope that no one judges you
    the words that you write
    the things that move you
    if love and rainbows are what your all about
    I think it's time for you to step out
    to see the world for what it really is
    people with shit that they need to say
    i'm new to this forum
    this thing
    this "truth"
    but not new to the world
    I'm fighting the bordem
    I wish that you could see where I'm at
    friends we would be
    if you could just see




    thanks for the reply..............
    Love is for the the lonely
    Money for the poor
    Hate is for the insecure
    War is for the weak
  • ok...

    where's that 10' pole when i need it???





    love andrew-wood?
    how 'bout fuck me in the brain?
    how bout dirty frank?
    or even wash???

    i wouldn't presume to figure what pj's all about

    these tunes aren't as graphic as babysistermama's

    but i think, and correct me if i'm wrong, sister...
    i think bsm's pushing the envelope
    i think bsm's challenging
    i think bsm's getting gory the thrill of the test

    shock value?

    perhaps...

    also perhaps the sheer fact that such descriptive things come from a female's point of view is what's bugging you...

    zee double standard, perhaps?
    ~all is full of love~
  • Originally posted by tenaciousA
    ok...where's that 10' pole when i need it???

    Ahem....
  • 8D






    not *THAT* pole...
    ~all is full of love~
  • Originally posted by babysistermama
    If I took my clothes off
    Would you stay until I’m done?
    Would you try to imagine me as your true love?
    Would you make believe that I was the one?

    If I left them on
    Could I keep your interest?
    Would you listen to me go on and on?
    About my life
    What I like
    What I’ve done

    Right now I seem perfect to you
    How long before you try to change that?
    Another year?
    Another month?
    Maybe this is why I’ve been single so long

    So what if I go into detail?
    About how I lived
    About my fancies
    My idiosyncrasies

    Change me now while you have the chance
    My esteem is low
    You’ve taught me that
    I’ll finish last

    So if I took my clothes off
    Would I be put together better?
    If I masturbated for you
    Would I be like no other?

    I know that this is only our first date
    We’re just on the salad
    You came and got me at ½ past eight
    I can’t seem to forgive you
    You were late

    I’m all dressed up
    And I’m wondering why
    You’re not even my type of guy

    I’m thinking that I’m not a hundred percent
    I’m not well
    A little sick
    But still I wonder
    How big is your dick?

    I love this. Just thought I'd put in my two cents. The end is killer.
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  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    Very nicely done.
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    sigh...

    I'm jealous... that piece was incredible.

    BSM... you must needs share more.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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