Love Song #1

FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When I held you in my arms
I lifted the stubborn curse
That withheld me from having love
and it struck me to the bottom of the oceans

When I had you in my grasp
You made me see that I was an asshole
for never sticking up for you
when you needed it the most

But now I am here for you
I can never let you go
I will never cause you harm
And together we will grow
Intertwined and beautiful
Like flowers on the bed
I will hold you close to me
And I will never let you go
I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

Sperm, It's in you to give.




I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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  • OutshynedOutshyned Posts: 55
    Very nice.
    "I guess it was the beatings... made me wise
    But I'm not about to give thanks, or apologize"

    The other day the above lyrics hit me like they never had before.......Almost dizzying....So true, feelings i long recognise summed up in words so beautifully/perfectly.....
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    I like this

    When I held you in my arms
    I lifted the stubborn curse
    That withheld me from having love
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    awww...thanks for sharing.
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