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FunkeR
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I met the man
Who put me together
My bones blood and flesh
Like an extravagant puzzle
He can work wonders
But he can't even be there
Yeah he couldn't save us
No he's not there to help us
Put us together so easily
Left, and abandoned
He didn't save us then, No he ain't gonna save us now
I met a man
So religious was he
Set himself one fire alive
Just to prove his faith to him
it makes me wonder
If he's even watching this
Yeah he couldn't save us
No he's not there to help us
Put us together so easily
Left, and abandoned
He didn't save us then, No he ain't gonna save us now
yeah you can call me weak
Call me a traitor, but he won't save us
He won't help us
He put us together, And left us to rot
He won't save us
He won't help anyone
He's traded in his role
To watch us rot!
Who put me together
My bones blood and flesh
Like an extravagant puzzle
He can work wonders
But he can't even be there
Yeah he couldn't save us
No he's not there to help us
Put us together so easily
Left, and abandoned
He didn't save us then, No he ain't gonna save us now
I met a man
So religious was he
Set himself one fire alive
Just to prove his faith to him
it makes me wonder
If he's even watching this
Yeah he couldn't save us
No he's not there to help us
Put us together so easily
Left, and abandoned
He didn't save us then, No he ain't gonna save us now
yeah you can call me weak
Call me a traitor, but he won't save us
He won't help us
He put us together, And left us to rot
He won't save us
He won't help anyone
He's traded in his role
To watch us rot!
I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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he set himself one fire alive...
but i really like it if it is...
there's a gentleman here who published a book called Rot...
there's a confirmed typo in there that i just love and wouldn't change if it were mine...
he wrote "pulled a peak" instead of "pulled a peek"
and it made me giggle
i dunno... you ever go up to a coffin and just wanna touch who so ever lay's remains? i know it's sick and taboo and all that, but... sheeshe, i think that's why i get that urge coffin side... you know? cofirmation that they're dead for sure? or shoot, just to know... sick.. i know...
anyway.. if this piece is about who i think it is, i understand the thought very much... why so much pain upon His children? that's why i'm inclined to believe that He ain't a He at all... It's an It... and it's inclined to sit back and let us come
meanderings...
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
this???
a typo?
shit, i don't know
"he pulled a peak" over the coffin's edge...
it's a typo...
damn publishers fucked it up... (oh, and it's a book by poster: RadarBabaO'Riley... good stuff, anyway....)
"should've been "pulled a peek"
but the instant i read it, i found myself an image of playing with grampa's hair...
Also the line extravagent puzzle sounds kinda weak in the first stanza - try not using a different adjective or even better none at all
Good poem though - God owes me 12 bucks and nigga never gonna pay that shit up
lmfao!