Magnanimous

FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Open the lids that hold you shut
Currents flow by yet you can't feel the touch
Beware of what lies underneath
All is not pretty, nor will please

I gave you all I could
You didn't appreciate what was given
So don't complain
Don't remain so unpleasant
We give you everything
And you don't care at all

Movement of your arms persuads me
Come unto myself a burden I can't lift
This guilt of ruining our useless lives
Just let you fall and have your fit

We gave you everything
You just didn't realize it then
So don't complain
Don't stay so unpleasant
We'd give you everything again
If you'd just care for it all

But you're just down
You're selfish at this point
Wake up and see
We forgive you now
I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

Sperm, It's in you to give.




I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    brass monkey

    that funky monkey
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    someone's been telling me to post something if i feel moved to. i've been resisting for a while now, but really, this one, funker, has me by the short ones.

    the feeling-like you don't feel appreciated. i know that emotion. you give and give, but you face rejections. i think we have to decide what we want, once and for all, in a definite and real way.

    maybe sometimes people just aren't ready at the same time. but if you're understood, it's unconditional caring. that's rare.

    whoever it is you wish would care for it all-i hope they awaken to forgiveness and another chance.

    that felt good.
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