I know I said I'd never post here anymore...
FunkeR
Posts: 105
But, this has meaning for me, call it cheap and cliche all you want, this means more than one can possibly explain with nouns and verbs(i suck at translating thoughts and emotions to words by the way), but it is more than words... it brings up memories and good times, and makes me think of the future... with more good times hopefully...
Its simply about love.
Adios
This Moment
Watching the days pass one by one
holding your breath for the rise of the sun
you helped me through shit and you know me too well
i'm scared to lose you to the demons within you
I love it when we lie alone in the bed
when you carress the softest of my skin
when I hold your hand and you hold it back
when we lie under dark lit night skies
until the orange yellow glow emmits from the blinds
this moment is ours and ours it will remain
to remember in the future as one of the most special moments
holding your head high can be a pain
the strike of fear, and lies that come from within
its like a cloud that from your pain it will form
and releases pellets of regret that fall down as rain
and no matter how long we stay together
one more year, a decade or until death
our love in this moment will echoe through the ages
and will be retold through the ones we created
and this moment is ours and ours it will remain
retold it can be by the ones who we raise
this moment is the one that proves we are made for each other
despite all ours flaws, and all our regrets
despite our mistakes and our daily faults
our imperfect genes and our imperfect hearts
we are perfect for each other and thats all that matters
in this moment
Its simply about love.
Adios
This Moment
Watching the days pass one by one
holding your breath for the rise of the sun
you helped me through shit and you know me too well
i'm scared to lose you to the demons within you
I love it when we lie alone in the bed
when you carress the softest of my skin
when I hold your hand and you hold it back
when we lie under dark lit night skies
until the orange yellow glow emmits from the blinds
this moment is ours and ours it will remain
to remember in the future as one of the most special moments
holding your head high can be a pain
the strike of fear, and lies that come from within
its like a cloud that from your pain it will form
and releases pellets of regret that fall down as rain
and no matter how long we stay together
one more year, a decade or until death
our love in this moment will echoe through the ages
and will be retold through the ones we created
and this moment is ours and ours it will remain
retold it can be by the ones who we raise
this moment is the one that proves we are made for each other
despite all ours flaws, and all our regrets
despite our mistakes and our daily faults
our imperfect genes and our imperfect hearts
we are perfect for each other and thats all that matters
in this moment
I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
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i don't think you're bad at conveying your thoughts, and this poem is lovely...
i like this part the best:
holding your head high can be a pain
the strike of fear, and lies that come from within
its like a cloud that from your pain it will form
and releases pellets of regret that fall down as rain
obviously, it goes without saying that There's No Love in Fear, but there is a LOT of fear in love, in new love anyway...
kudos to everyone who tries it twice, you know?
thank you for sharing this, FunkeR
But thanks anyways...
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
I **loved** this.
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
You seem to have gotten some stars in your sentence by accident, you might want to edit them out.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
Ahhh, I see... my bad.
Well thanks for visiting my thread... come again.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
...crankypants....
Yeah... my pants tend to be cranky this time of the year... don't mind them.
Sperm, It's in you to give.
I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
understood, i mean... we now have to wait til october for the next free-candy holiday...