my friend's poem

california girlcalifornia girl Posts: 70
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Standing in Space



Hello, I see we've met, before,

obviously affected each others core

of being

I'm seeing you now in someone else's guise,

You're someone else, but you've still got your eyes



Maybe the roles were reversed

Maybe we rehearsed

As each other, last time around

'cause it seems like we're so well versed,

I know your pitch and you know my sound



It's like this: nine holed leaking frame

Creates and contains

This certain resonance

And we're carried on this plane,

To find each other and experience

What happens when we bIend

What notes we hold, what notes we bend

And no one's ever to blame,

'cause the distance is intrinsic to the sound we send



And there's something

all encompassing

that we all come from

and although we split for lifetimes

in between we're one

sound

And here once again on this same sweet ground

I've found

we've met

and yet ………… we never really were separate

were we friend?

Never separate



Rosetta Stone
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  • Next Time



    Don't want to do this the next time around

    Want to get it all straight and nailed down

    Just say "You're a jerk" and I'll agree,

    And the next time around will be better you'll see



    You can't just sweep it all under the rug

    Because there's no carpet big enough

    and I can't just shrug it off, like an oyster from the shell

    just say "oh shucks", just say "oh well"



    History not learned is bound to repeat,

    You think you're on a different road, but it's the same street

    You've been on, who knows how many times?

    I've pushed your buttons and you've rung my chimes



    Next time: We won't be so strange

    Next time: We'll both act our age

    Next time: We'll know all the ropes

    Next time: I have such high hopes



    Rosetta Stone
  • I like these a lot!! Thank you for sharing them!!!
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Standing in Space



    Hello, I see we've met, before,

    obviously affected each others core

    of being

    I'm seeing you now in someone else's guise,

    You're someone else, but you've still got your eyes



    Maybe the roles were reversed

    Maybe we rehearsed

    As each other, last time around

    'cause it seems like we're so well versed,

    I know your pitch and you know my sound



    It's like this: nine holed leaking frame

    Creates and contains

    This certain resonance

    And we're carried on this plane,

    To find each other and experience

    What happens when we bIend

    What notes we hold, what notes we bend

    And no one's ever to blame,

    'cause the distance is intrinsic to the sound we send



    And there's something

    all encompassing

    that we all come from

    and although we split for lifetimes

    in between we're one

    sound

    And here once again on this same sweet ground

    I've found

    we've met

    and yet ………… we never really were separate

    were we friend?

    Never separate



    Rosetta Stone
    Next Time



    Don't want to do this the next time around

    Want to get it all straight and nailed down

    Just say "You're a jerk" and I'll agree,

    And the next time around will be better you'll see



    You can't just sweep it all under the rug

    Because there's no carpet big enough

    and I can't just shrug it off, like an oyster from the shell

    just say "oh shucks", just say "oh well"



    History not learned is bound to repeat,

    You think you're on a different road, but it's the same street

    You've been on, who knows how many times?

    I've pushed your buttons and you've rung my chimes



    Next time: We won't be so strange

    Next time: We'll both act our age

    Next time: We'll know all the ropes

    Next time: I have such high hopes



    Rosetta Stone

    These are interesting, because it seems like they can be about individuals trying something again, or about souls (in general) living a series of lives.

    :)
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  • I like these a lot!! Thank you for sharing them!!!

    cliff ~~~ why so glum, chum?
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