Hmm... Untitled

edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
now i see it... some...
another taste has come to me__

it tried to leave me... i was
seeing the things in this spell of life__

the weather will be colder
this winter than warm record
years in 2001/2000.
cool down time__

all hail the sniper-prince
to reign his power among peace
and end by claiming victory over
incompetence... incompetence can
be overruled with effort__
killing doesn't cut it__

tori has a beautiful attachment
to her... deep within
my heart and mind.
i need to listen
more to her to satisfy
my loss__

(FYI: this was a moment... trust me when i say that pearl jam holds more consistent meaning to me than an occassional bout with amos)
+he ha++ed monkey
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  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    oh my heart
    how it hurts
    this hurts so bad
    i can write like dude from the 1500's

    just kiddin

    A
    convicted
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by keven 33
    oh my heart
    how it hurts
    this hurts so bad
    i can write like dude from the 1500's

    just kiddin

    A

    I think you are a beautiful poet
    you are here
    you try and thats all that counted really.

    you tried.
    lay your head down with me this morning
    and eventho i have retired from this war

    you and i are safe
    in our nest
    happiness is just outside out door.
  • keven you need to look up some of the true poets before you start with this talk , i know you battle depression but who doesnt in this era, stay focused and get a dictionary you truck drivin tobacco chewin slimeball


    hahahhahahhahahhahahhahahahahahahaaa

    just kidding everyone


    the church of god will help you
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