litte poem called "Fraud"
roth102084
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For some reason this sounded dark enough for me. My last one...some true artists on this message board bashed because I'm not unique enough and my thought are dull. Anyway....
The Ritual of the one begins and I like to watch you sin
Make myself feel more alert because the things you dream are from that dirt
Tell me to look so unforgiven, while the force that provokes me are the things you've caused driven
Like a serious pal, contrast to me you like to glee that crowd
Too late some how, I let you dictate the mind of true a pal
The Ritual of the one begins and I like to watch you sin
Make myself feel more alert because the things you dream are from that dirt
Tell me to look so unforgiven, while the force that provokes me are the things you've caused driven
Like a serious pal, contrast to me you like to glee that crowd
Too late some how, I let you dictate the mind of true a pal
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Well, I'm glad you didn't listen to them and that you posted! It's certainly not dull!
Keep it up!
Don't throw in the towel b/c a single person put down one of only two things you've ever posted here before.
It's one thing to not take kindly to someone's criticism. It's another thing to give up and run away from it.