So You Can Sleep At Night

bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
If I had a dollar
I'd buy a house where we could live
Caring for each other
Just a place to call our home
And if we just knew wrong from right
We would not hurt we would not fight
Dream sweet dreams all through the night
Until the morning comes

If I had someone to love
I would not push I would not shove
I'd never know what lonely was
Because I'd never be alone
And if I had a hand to hold
I'd hold it tight until I grew old
And listen to your stories told
They keep me hanging on

If I had a magic charm
It would protect you from all harm
There'd be no sirens to alarm
We could stay here every day
And if I were a super hero
Good guys all, the villains zero
I'd save you from all that is evil
So you can sleep at night
there'll be time for laughin'
there's no time to cry
soon i will be leavin'
look me in the eye
no matter what's in front of me
it's your face that i'll see
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This sounds like heaven to me. :)
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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    justam wrote:
    This sounds like heaven to me. :)

    I agree it indeed sounded inviting. Thanks for sharing!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    ...to me it sounds like... neVer-eVerland...~

    :D
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    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • wow, alot of replies of it feeling like heaven
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Don't you dare act upon this before you are 25!
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • Very sweet, bossman3188. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Yes, I too like this one, it is very sweet and inviting... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Bossman....
    how kind.


    I still want my first house in the Poconos.
    Like that'll happen,right?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    Bossman....
    how kind.


    I still want my first house in the Poconos.
    Like that'll happen,right?


    heyhey! i just dropped a line onto your "Lesson" thread.... so coincidental,... i was looking earlier at my aunt's atlas,... being a PA fellow myself, i've always wanted a place in the Poconos: beautiful landscape, mountainous, rivers, and lush, flowing forests; 2-3 hours from Philly; 1-2 hours from NYC; 3 hours from home--the whole circumstance up there is damn near ideal for my working-life [assuming i ever get there!!!]!

    but yeah, i picked out my 'first-choice' spot this morning: Promised Land Lake. Awesome name, great location far east of that pit-hole Scranton/W.B. (sorry Scranton/W.B. residents!!!:)), and with an official campsite nearby and the Delaware S.F. just due east a bit i am set on searching--i'm only left to create the Economy needed to complete my mission.... nothing can stop me now!!!

    have you any ideas on how this life ends?--i mean, where you want to settle??? are you PA-folk as well???
    change begins with discontent.
  • sorry BM.. didnt mean to slight your poem and rant on about mountain-climbing and such... i just got a bit excited about the aforementioned coincidence...

    your piece is clearly magnificent, as you probably already knew even before the great reviews listed above/previously... this opening segment of stanza 2 is top-notch in my book:
    If I had someone to love
    I would not push I would not shove
    I'd never know what lonely was
    Because I'd never be alone

    ...very nicely done!

    i see you're PA bretheren... you ever been to the Poconos? anywhere east of the Monongahela? i've been to Pburgh twice, very lovely, antique city... which i mean in the nicest of compliments--and yes i do realize its been modernizing for some time, but appropriately as far as i could tell, keeping in-tact a great deal of its heritage and historical-aura. you been to Falling Water ever?--i got out there last spring just as the final snows were still on the ground but the weather bore a breezy warmth.... so serene and peaceful... i hiked the upper rim [back private driveway] for about 5 hours and sat on a rock over-looking the cliff to the river/stream below... i ended up just staring at it for over an hour.... it was a much needed rejuvention for me... Nature, Art, Society all in One there... i see this potential in the Poconos with a much more practical locale where the busy New Yorkers and the distanced Phillies might confluence into a singular pilgrimage-site from time-after-time... [yeah i want to live in an artist-statement, in case anyone has yet to realize the true extent of my insanity]...

    anyway sorry now for rambling-on upon your wonderful poem/thread... keep em coming eh!--i'm off now for my previously mentioned BRUNCH!!!;););)!!!!!

    ...i'll check back as the Tense-Spin dictates to see if you or Ali have responded... sorry again for the wordiness!

    :)
    change begins with discontent.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    heyhey! i just dropped a line onto your "Lesson" thread.... so coincidental,... i was looking earlier at my aunt's atlas,... being a PA fellow myself, i've always wanted a place in the Poconos: beautiful landscape, mountainous, rivers, and lush, flowing forests; 2-3 hours from Philly; 1-2 hours from NYC; 3 hours from home--the whole circumstance up there is damn near ideal for my working-life [assuming i ever get there!!!]!

    but yeah, i picked out my 'first-choice' spot this morning: Promised Land Lake. Awesome name, great location far east of that pit-hole Scranton/W.B. (sorry Scranton/W.B. residents!!!:)), and with an official campsite nearby and the Delaware S.F. just due east a bit i am set on searching--i'm only left to create the Economy needed to complete my mission.... nothing can stop me now!!!

    have you any ideas on how this life ends?--i mean, where you want to settle??? are you PA-folk as well???
    Yea,babe.The pocs.And eventually a place down the beachside.
    I'm so burnt out!!!I just need to get away from the city,maybe,.The career is just nonexistant for the most part unless you fit in with the norm...:)
    BUT...I love hiking...hopefully I wont falll off the MTN. and die.That almost happened a couple of times.I was like sooooo scared.I have so many funny stories too,a coup[lre tragic,but,yea,The POconos and a house to fix up.Mosaic floors,stained glass windows,,,,,,ahhhh.:):):)
    Peace..thanx b-man.:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    Yea,babe.The pocs.And eventually a place down the beachside.
    I'm so burnt out!!!I just need to get away from the city,maybe,.The career is just nonexistant for the most part unless you fit in with the norm...:)
    BUT...I love hiking...hopefully I wont falll off the MTN. and die.That almost happened a couple of times.I was like sooooo scared.I have so many funny stories too,a coup[lre tragic,but,yea,The POconos and a house to fix up.Mosaic floors,stained glass windows,,,,,,ahhhh.:):):)
    Peace...:D


    yeah careerism is hard... trying to ride those market-waves and all... alot like surfing i imagine, although i have never lived near the ocean so don't have that experience literally..... i dont wanna be an advertised money-whore of an artist, so i'm being patient with that realm as cream rising above the foam and fluid of societies eventually--i know my day will arrive and i will breeze through it like a hurricane in florida.... but what is the 'norm'???--i can never really tell what is normal or not... "i only know my mind".... so yeah, that's today and tomorrow who knows,... maybe i'll fly into the Geographic Society?...!!!

    but please, do be careful.... the last thing i want to see is someone so unique and special falling off of the mountain...

    i know you'll be all-right... just hold-on okay... "there's a springtime on the way"... :)

    bye now.
    change begins with discontent.
  • never been to the poconos. and where may I ask is Falling Water? I have never heard of this place.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    you guys are too kind
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    If I had a dollar
    I'd buy a house where we could live
    Caring for each other
    Just a place to call our home
    And if we just knew wrong from right
    We would not hurt we would not fight
    Dream sweet dreams all through the night
    Until the morning comes

    If I had someone to love
    I would not push I would not shove
    I'd never know what lonely was
    Because I'd never be alone
    And if I had a hand to hold
    I'd hold it tight until I grew old
    And listen to your stories told
    They keep me hanging on

    If I had a magic charm
    It would protect you from all harm
    There'd be no sirens to alarm
    We could stay here every day
    And if I were a super hero
    Good guys all, the villains zero
    I'd save you from all that is evil
    So you can sleep at night


    I look at you with passion delight
    I hold you close in the candle light
    Flames dancing all around
    The passion of love makes little sound

    Hearts beating with silent sound
    My heart starts to pound
    Glazing into your that sparkle light
    I know this must be the night

    Slowing holding each other tight
    I can feel the glow of moonlight
    My skin tingles to the touch
    As we embrace with love so much

    Our lips are set ablaze
    flashing thoughts of love are amazed
    Holding, kissing with emotion desire
    Dancing on the coals of fire

    Time and space seem to never end
    So is the love I want to send
    A delightful pain strikes my soul
    You have made me so whole.
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i iwsh that for myself too, but it hasn't been too good in that area lately
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    i iwsh that for myself too, but it hasn't been too good in that area lately


    yeah well, don't give up hope... hey, looks like VELVET I SITE N ALI have quite the bond,... perhaps u may find one as well. i, too have always wanted to spend time in the poconos,... kinky dreams of mine (;p)
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    The deafening silence that haunts me in the darkness
    It stirs me from my restless sleep
    My arms reach out to touch and caress you
    But they only find the cold, empty air
    My Lonliness surrounds me
    When you won’t

    My body aches for you
    I want so desperately to have you with me
    To feel your urgent, lustful touch
    And let you feel my passion
    To have you touch me deep within my core
    But you won’t

    Your words echo in my mind
    The memory of your voice haunts me
    I long to hear you speak my name
    To hear you verbalize the words you write
    To hear you cry out in passion & pleasure
    Now you won’t

    Lying here alone craving your touch
    I imagine the scent of your hair and skin
    I long to feel your exploring hands upon me
    I want to know the feeling of you deep inside me
    I find myself needing you… wanting you to need me too
    Maybe you won’t

    Surrender to me as I surrender myself to you
    We will not speak of tomorrows or days to come
    We will only rejoice in our glorious moments together
    Pleasure given without the need to commit to more
    You’ll never regret our joining, or regret our time together
    I promise you won’t
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
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