Hold This

bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The June summer evening I saw you cry.
You cried of my departure,
and I held you in my arms.
You unknowingly took my heart,
and since then I have had to hold this.

Best friends like a brother,
who now will be a father at such a young age.
now I question all of what is real.
You have yet to tell me,
so I am left to hold this.

Grip the wheel tight,
accidents happen every night.
Getting the call was unexpected,
although you are safe,
we all had to hold this.

And through all of this it goes back to you.
The woman I care for so deeply,
since i saw the tears fall from your eyes.
Now I question if that was real,
until the answer arrives, you will hold this heart of mine.





Its always hard to recieve news of a friend impregnating a woman, hear of a friend in a car accident, and have troubles with someone you care for so deeply. Well i went through all of that in one night so I had to write something.
there'll be time for laughin'
there's no time to cry
soon i will be leavin'
look me in the eye
no matter what's in front of me
it's your face that i'll see
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  • Its always hard to recieve news of a friend impregnating a woman, hear of a friend in a car accident, and have troubles with someone you care for so deeply. Well i went through all of that in one night so I had to write something.

    Oh my, bossman! :( So sorry you had to go through that! Your writing was good! The title and the repetition of it really drove it home. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • thanks, i havnt wrote on here in a long time...so i figured now was a good time to do so
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • The June summer evening I saw you cry.
    You cried of my departure,
    and I held you in my arms.
    You unknowingly took my heart,
    and since then I have had to hold this.

    Best friends like a brother,
    who now will be a father at such a young age.
    now I question all of what is real.
    You have yet to tell me,
    so I am left to hold this.

    Grip the wheel tight,
    accidents happen every night.
    Getting the call was unexpected,
    although you are safe,
    we all had to hold this.

    And through all of this it goes back to you.
    The woman I care for so deeply,
    since i saw the tears fall from your eyes.
    Now I question if that was real,
    until the answer arrives, you will hold this heart of mine.





    Its always hard to recieve news of a friend impregnating a woman, hear of a friend in a car accident, and have troubles with someone you care for so deeply. Well i went through all of that in one night so I had to write something.



    thats so beautiful..im glad you released all that happend in one night in such a beautiful way....(((((((((((((((Bossman))))))))))))))) hope you're okay...
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • thanks, i havnt wrote on here in a long time...so i figured now was a good time to do so

    :) Thanks for sharing! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • your very welcome
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • that's pretty good stuff there
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