Song i wrote

magonigolmagonigol Posts: 11
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
How she said, how could i replace you?
The trip of a lifetime destroyed his heaven
Selfish thoughts and lies that followed
The charade revealed, his heaven turned to his reality

The boy she knew became the man he would regret,
January 6, the date he'd never forget

Loyalty his downfall
trust me, trust me, the words once echoed
hurt, anger and confusion, take your fucking pick,
step right up to see the one who didnt exist

The boy she knew became the man she never met,
January 6, the date he'd never forget

The man he became was the boy she'd never regret,
January 6, the date that was etched

How he thought, how could i replace you,
4 months were fixed,
till the return on January 6.




Tell me what u think, it was written at all hours of the night and when the old head wasnt on straight.
im the first man to wet my pants
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  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    1
    convicted
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by keven 33
    here is what i think
    i think we all should be bethrothed
    in the name of loyalty
    cause im such a dork
    i cant live in this society

    come on back
    im a truck


    come in i am open
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