yeah... i'm a man....

tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it floats down like heaven and heavy
feather hard pillows cuss
beneath the weight
of the twice baked potato
that is my head...

little cheese
some garlic
you know...
back in the oven?

and the little duct outside her eye
you know...
the one where the reaper sleeps?
the little duct lie open
inviting
me to swim in the pool her existence
created in me

the anti-shallow ended love
her soul encompassed

she knew she was big
bent and creaked with the weight of hope
that God was watching her smile

but, alas...
t'was only I
~all is full of love~
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  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    im a broken man tonight i cant see the light
    all i can think about is you
    how could i lose you when i love you more
    than anything

    yes id die for you
    honey you know its all i want to do
    yes all i want to do
    is die for you

    consumed by you im broken
    the light escapes the memories remain
    stained forver changed forever lame
    all i want is to honor you
    to live for you



    this poem thing is not right
    convicted
  • i think the cheese and garlic line kind of is to much for the opening poem

    honey jesus died for you already we dont need to carry that weight around with us , thats why god gave us the story and spirit of jesus


    i love you
    you love me
    were a happy family
    barney
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