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tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you will never be right like rain
coming in on the back of a balloon
sideways and floating...
that is, until you let go
and everybody knows that's not going to happen
everybody knows that helium escapes
with one little prick
and my, isn't your skin thick?
~all is full of love~
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    You got me Ten...A :)
    Time for the Sandman to come...
    Later!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • babysistermamababysistermama Posts: 35
    little pricks..............





































    dime a dozen............
    Love is for the the lonely
    Money for the poor
    Hate is for the insecure
    War is for the weak
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    nice tenaciousA!
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    yo Ali - hit the hay already will ya? :)

    and hey babysis ;) don't you know a little som'n som'n?



    and mr jde? a big thanks and a super good night to you :)


    later y'all
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    yo T


    nice work as usual. Not that it's any usual in a bad way. I mean that your work is just consistently of upper quality. Usually.

    I'm going to shut up now.

    love, seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This image is nice!

    Though, I have to say that I believe the thick-skinned passenger probably didn't board the zeppelin without a good plan for dis-embarking.

    (Most likely the air-ship can be lowered over a nice body of water occasionally.) :D
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    just jam... i wish you were correct in assuming the existence of an escape plan... :):)




    and seta...


    i called the poem faeries to come last night, and they just sent one little goofy one... ;) i like little goofy ones sometimes... but

    well, i guess i just take what i can get...

    it's just nice to have a place to put this stuff up...



    y'all enjoy the day :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    oh


    and i wrote this cuz ppl tell me i'm right as rain all the time and just yesterday, i figured out what that meant...

    rain falls perpendicular to the ground..


    oh, and so i mixed that discovery up in this *person* i know.... this *.....* (refer to bsm's dime a dozen comment above....)



    so...



    blegh...
    ~all is full of love~
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    TenA... let's just say I find your voice refreshing.
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    wellllll thank you sweetykins :)



    dat's very sweet :)
    ~all is full of love~
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