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tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
oh i can feel it now
the sadness in tenfold
he felt for me
in not knowing exactly
still knowing
from the sound of my voice
the unspoken love
my desire to lift
for three sweet moments a day
my own muscles aching
from the leaden weight
lost love is
~all is full of love~
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  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    thats very good, but also very sad tenaciousA.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    This one's leaden weight is weighing me down. Sad :( but good! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    very good.....very good........
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    lost love is so much like that..............thank you this is so so good...
    Seek It
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Oooooohhhhh
    don't be sad.

    I'll give you smile and a taco and a subscription renewal card for Star Wars Insider if you won't be sad.

    I'll do backwards jumping jacks
    and give sideway wedgies to Maury Povich
    and sqaure dance in a round room
    if you won't be sad.

    I'll scream my lungs out until my lungs pop out and fill this room with squishy screams
    if you won't be sad.
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    did you say taco?
    ~all is full of love~
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    did you say taco?
    Better yet:

    Chalupa
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    ch ch chaloo!paaaaa



    who can be sad and say chalupa at the same time?



    we're on a mexican radio
    we're on a mexican whoa oh
    radio

    i'd rather be in tiujuana
    eating barbe qued iguana

    :):):):)



    where the hell is seta?
    ~all is full of love~
  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    where the hell is seta?
    Last I heard was that he fell into a pineapple pudding pit and didn't know how to do the pinapple paddle and tried to eat his way out but had an allergic reaction and swelled up to the size of 9 Danny Devitos and became lodged in the pineapple pit.

    Set your Phazers for "Pineapple Pudding Pit Finder" and we'll get him out!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Oooooohhhhh
    don't be sad.

    I'll give you smile and a taco and a subscription renewal card for Star Wars Insider if you won't be sad.

    I'll do backwards jumping jacks
    and give sideway wedgies to Maury Povich
    and sqaure dance in a round room
    if you won't be sad.

    I'll scream my lungs out until my lungs pop out and fill this room with squishy screams
    if you won't be sad.

    Would you? Really? This I gotta see! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    a bump for finsbury
    ~all is full of love~
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    No wonder we got crazies here....

    Youzz all de same fellas!!!!!!!
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    i have no idea what you're talking about...



    :)
    ~all is full of love~
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