anvil shaped

tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art


vanishing
to sound

pure sound

a heart erupting
pressure capped, yet

lifted...

eagles breathing thermal anti-grav
and yet

the net

the hand of God holds
a heart
a warm afternoon
cloud

hoping,
anvil shaped
and looming

~all is full of love~
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This is interesting. I even like the way you made it look. :)

    (Although, what are you saying about an anvil held up for a fall? I'm curious.)
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  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    ...like one of those anvil-shaped thunderheads?


    hmmm...


    needs work, eh?


    thanks for reading :D
    ~all is full of love~
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    The tribes labored
    Dancing feverishly under the anvils
    Held aloft
    Swaying slowly, punching holes in the sky
    Silent with their potential energy
    storing the speed they would gather
    hurling toward the ground

    ...Theres something about that image, something as simple as taking an anvil and holding in the air struck me as immensely powerful, it's such a symbol of immovable strength and solidity.

    It might be an image you want to explore further
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    i did the tag, toast... way :)


    out here we get full hemispheres of sky, so it's really easy to check the development, full size and shape of these massive cloud formations

    pretty sweet


    i go claustrophobic when i go back east :)


    thanks again, though... i do like the add :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Hehe, except the word cloud wasn't in there, that could have been a plane, a building, a hawk...but my experiences with skies that big, since I also live in new york, were when I went to the smokies in tennessee, and also in europe there are very rarely skyscrapers, so my travels abroad yielded surprisingly beautiful skies.

    But don't knock the towers, you get a new perspective on the ground.
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