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trying to lighten up

tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A small glass handprint
on a cocktail, molatov
explodes when it’s tossed
into the dumpster of my dreams.

It’s not his handprint
nor is it hers,
Or anyone’s really…

It’s the fictitious child
the affectuous baby girl
overstated yet, unsung
and borne only to me.

In hiding when I’m feeling wide.
~all is full of love~
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    There's a narrative of separation, pain, regret and a telling of the lives of others affected in this process, powerfully and eloquently implied in these words. To write a poem and to suggest a world of human experience within it and beyond it is a true gift.

    Thank you for sharing it.

    :)
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    thank you muchly finsbury :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • rise aboverise above Posts: 71
    she IS gifted...blows me away every time.
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

    *****

    "A little voice Inside my head said, "Don't look back. You can never look back." --Don Henley

    *****
    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

    *****

    "there i go, turn the page..."
    --Bob Segar & Metallica

    "You’re a butterfly
    And butterflies are free to fly" - EJ



  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    wow... great stuff tenacious!!!
    very impressed
    :)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Sharon_Hearts_PJSharon_Hearts_PJ Posts: 1,383
    :(
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    13??

    we b ok...

    k?






    :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    and many many thanks to miss rise and miss buru :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • Sharon_Hearts_PJSharon_Hearts_PJ Posts: 1,383
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    13??

    we b ok...

    k?






    :)

    K

    K

    K

    took

    my

    temper
    a
    t
    u
    r
    e

    whaaa?
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
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