scraps.....

towertower Posts: 16
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
every time we try to be alone
i find theres nothing to say to you
that you don't already know
and try and smile and brush aside
the fact that everything seems fine
seems fine

and people carry on with the way they are
and everything is fine

desolation, having missed my chance
to sit and say not a word to you
and even feel what i cannot speak
together, with you, and everything looks
so good from the far side of who we are
and who we want to be, and where we want to be
and it seems like we're nowhere we actually are

but still everyone acts as if its nothing at all
and that the sun rising tomorrow will be
just fine
just fine indeed
very much just fine
hey, what the hell happened here?
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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    i really enjoyed this one. know exactly how this feels and you've painted it perfectly. :)
  • towertower Posts: 16
    only just noticed this, thought it had dropped off the third page unreplyed to... *sniff* ;)

    thanks, its not entirely about someone i don't entirely know.

    if you fail to understand me, in a manner of non speaking.

    :)
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • ah

    that is beautiful



    thats a good closer for today



    thank god for jesus day
    amen
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