Moonwalk

dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I love Luna :)
I thought it would be fun to explore and get to know the moon a bit more personally. The man named areas of the moon resonate human passions, longings, sufferings, and joys. I thought it would be a fun exercise to use these names as art’s inspiration. Pick a sea, an ocean, crater, or rock and immortalize it with a poem or prose. As we go for our moonwalks we can intimately experience it together. :)

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For more moon information: http://www.oarval.org/MoonMapen.htm
'..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

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  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    There reigns in winter
    a barren beauty: A sea of cold
    blue moon-lit gemstone;

    a faceted ocean plain of diamond ice.
    White monarch splendor
    commands soundless serenity,

    while we, attendant soldiers, moonwalkers
    chattering frozen breaths, alight
    on forgotten palaces of chill
    where once ruled white wisp words.

    We enter the deep cold gemscape
    Finding ciphers on the rocks. We learn
    the secrets of this jewelground. The cold is kind.

    The cold is the presence of silence,
    free of earthly firescreams of wars,
    where earth kingdoms fall
    as burning citadels.

    The kingliness here is not a fallen man,
    The cold sea king is silence,
    a reigning barren beauty.

    Eternal,
    Silence is all.

    We search the cold sea surface
    of the moon.
    We search the kingly silence
    for a peace.
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • Well, I've got a villanelle I wrote a leeetle while ago. :D

    The ocean, moonbright, a mirror, clear,
    Nightpulsing, offers up the Lake of Dreams
    reflected on black currents. I draw near

    toward the midnight breakers, and I hear
    strange echoes where the dreampool moon begleams
    The ocean, moonbright, a mirror, clear.

    Strange echoes sound: Cliffstranded cries of fear
    from nightlost cattle storm the void with screams
    reflected on black currents. I draw near

    To where the knifing surf strikes up to tear
    the stranded bog bare from its fielded seams.
    The ocean, moonbright, a mirror, clear

    rests as a chance of sleep to end this drear
    of fraught seawanderings: Thoughtbroken streams,
    relected on black currents. I draw near

    Toward the mirror moon, to disappear
    Beneath the shifting pulse of dreamspun beams
    reflected on black currents. I draw near
    The ocean, moonbright, a mirror, clear.
  • Er, I forgot to say, my piece is called "Lake of Dreams". :)
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