Deaf Message

FreethinkerFreethinker Posts: 28
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The message I am receiving is you are leaving
Silence grows deaf
The last leaf has fallen
Tears that never fell burn inside

Where did never go
When was it spoken
As if it didn’t exist
What are those words I saw in the air
Burned into memory
Testifies to the lie our lives are

Melancholy echoes and reverberates beneath
Preaching upon the alter of pain
Smiling at the pyre of ashen promises

Light bending the shadows
My eyes bend to your will
Thy will be thy pain and pleasure
Will bares mourning for what cannot be
What was sworn, stolen

Baptized in my tears
Last rights given with my fears
Who is responsible for how my future is written
I did not write mine like this
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Comments

  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    stop fighting, just lay down here with us..

    give up with us. there are 3 now.

    trinity crying
    for

    peace
  • I'm only 19! I'm not giving up just yet.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Originally posted by Freethinker
    I'm only 19! I'm not giving up just yet.

    Good for you!! :D
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • Originally posted by justam
    Good for you!! :D

    Thank you : ).
  • I was wondering what people thought of the poem itself not the message.
  • towertower Posts: 16
    beautiful

    imagery and emotion

    however, bares?

    im confudged.
    hey, what the hell happened here?
  • Thank you. However I'm not sure what you mean by
    "however, bares?

    im confudged."
  • the vibes are so strong in here
    time to hit the water bong
    livin this party up
    im drinkin a whole gallon

    light me up a cigarette
    and lets go burn somethin

    lets tear this mutha down
    lets go burn down the
    bad moods

    yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    lets go be good
    oh yeah
    we can do it
    lets go be good
    frickin a
    we can go be good
    lets do it
    today




    "whats good for the goose is good for ol yeller"
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