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Heroine

FreethinkerFreethinker Posts: 28
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A chasm I have come to be
Longing to fill with impurities
I lust to numb my senses
Wishing to be senseless
In this time of meaninglessness

I am aloof
A wandering mass of atoms
Nothing more
Nothing less
Nothing more I wish to be
In this time
In this space
In this place

Peace has become an illusive stranger
As well as her brother happiness
Sorrow has become my last sign of life
And so my sorrow, my drug, my lifeline
Like a homeless heroine addict
I travel the streets of loneliness among
Millions of ghosts

We’ll always have something…
My sorrow and I.
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  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    there are 4 now.

    just give up. it's ok.

    we are here. we have given up

    together

    youarenotalone with us here. this is not art
    this is life and lonely love on the internet.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Originally posted by BhagavadGita
    there are 4 now.

    just give up. it's ok.

    we are here. we have given up

    together

    youarenotalone with us here. this is not art
    this is life and lonely love on the internet.


    BG, I know misery loves company, but
    why would you encourage someone to do something harmful like giving up? Its NOT ok.
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    freethinker...

    i'm sorry


    but

    in your line...


    "i am aloof"???





    i keep thinking you're a loofa....




    (i hope everyone knows what a loofa is...)






    not laughing at your expense
    just letting you know
    peace and happiness are on the inside

    use the loofa
    scrub off that 8 foot thick skin
    and find 'em

    be a loofa to the hurt












    (disclaimer: all statements heretoforthwith made by a certifiable dork....)
    ~all is full of love~
  • FreethinkerFreethinker Posts: 28
    Originally posted by BhagavadGita
    there are 4 now.

    just give up. it's ok.

    we are here. we have given up

    together

    youarenotalone with us here. this is not art
    this is life and lonely love on the internet.

    "Come...lay with us" That sounded seductive, lol. I'm not giving up...to give up would be to lay down and die. There's someone out there for me. Maybe she's already gotten away from me...maybe for a good reason. Life is a mystery...what fun would it be if it wasn't?
  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    it would be most incredibly lame
    ~all is full of love~
  • FreethinkerFreethinker Posts: 28
    A loofa? LOL, thats funny it didn't come to mind until you said something of course. But yeah, I'll take your advice on how to use a loofa. : )
  • FreethinkerFreethinker Posts: 28
    I agree tenacious A : )
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