Allow Me....

Jerram

I haven't posted here much...here's my latest tune. I promise to get back and look at everyone's work. but I gotta go cut some grass before rain comes...

thanks in advance for your feedback.


Allow Me


v1
I hung around waiting to be wanted
You were wanting to be waited on
I needed the danger of that kiss
To remind me of the bliss of sitting in the sun

Recall the day our love was given birth
I needed your touch to give me worth
Now its clear that in this season
You can’t give me any reason to return

Chorus:
So allow me to disavow you
From this ill-advised and broken down affair
And allow me, to endow you
With the power of the rearviewmirror

v2
Just happy to be seen upon your arm
I was the victim of another false alarm
Dismissed my love as ordinary
It seems you longed to bury me in harm

It’s funny that now you’ve come callin’
You seem to think I’m still fallin
But the truth’s come into view
Why must you choose to refuse it all

Chorus:
So allow me to disavow you
From this ill-advised and broken down affair
And allow me, to endow you
With the power of the rearviewmirror


Outro:
Someday you’ll come to know the story
That this love wasn’t meant to last
When the present so soon becomes past
You learn that it truly was ordinary

bambi girl

that is really good! im very much liking that

thanks.

Jerram

I SWEAR, I was not thinking of PJ when I included rearviewmirror in the song...maybe its just subconscious use of the word. Anyway, this songs about looking back on a relationship and realizing it had little worth...different than PJ's rearview...