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Adrenolinatania

cosmonautcosmonaut Posts: 3
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
entre fuego azul y rojo,
te veia solo a ratos...
pero despues de las batallas
ya no te podre encontrar.

otro dia y ya mas lejos
y tu no intentas el hablar
sabes que lo que sientes
no se puede ocultar.

la risa del destino
me jugo una broma cruel contigo
y aunque quiera no podré
quedarme dormido en tu abismo.

eres mi vicio
y tambien mi perdicion
nunca debi probarte
adrenolinatania dame bendicion.

quisiera estar contigo
y hacer de esta vereda un camino,
y llegar hasta ese lugar frio
que es el saber por que vivimos.

HMB
I wish I was an astronaut...
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Comments

  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    This piece seems so familiar to me.

    I swear I've read it somewhere before.

    It's good to see some hispanic poetry on here.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Not that I don't like it, I do. Desperate love requires poetry,
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • cosmonautcosmonaut Posts: 3
    Originally posted by setaside2
    This piece seems so familiar to me.

    I swear I've read it somewhere before.

    It's good to see some hispanic poetry on here.

    I swear it is authentic and innedit.... written by me.
    I wish I was an astronaut...
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