what are you ON??

Felicity

OOOOoohhhhhhh
you silly m0nkey boy
how i see you begin
to wheel and tumble
your mind rolling over
and taking off over there
for a while
and then back to check
what's up
for just a moment
until you zap into focus
then spin off to the left
flying like a spazz bat
laughing like a crazed cat

when you're like this
it's like i have to reach
and keep grabbing
in hopes of catching
at least a whisper of you
that lets me know
you haven't forgotten
about me
because you have to be
who you are
when you are like that
it's who i love
and always will

goofy boy

grooveamatic

hmmmm...this boy sounds fun but difficult to be with....a sponanaiety that is fun at first but dangerous....I have experienced a girl quite like this....

violet ray

hey, i know him!

FinsburyParkCarrots

I like the funny 'y' endings in "you silly m0nkey boy/goofy boy" and the sound shapes "zap/spazz bat/crazed cat", and "grabbing/ catching". The piece has a good bouncy rhythm too.

Felicity

hey fin well he has a good bouncy rhythm too.

vr,who do you think it is?please tell me!i wrote this about my friend alain who is bout as add as they come.

i also met this girl named heather who had one of those million miles an hour minds.i'm one of those people who can keep up with that,for a while anyhow.those people are always fun to be around,but they get so sad when no one understands even though they say they don't care.

sometimes just one word can send him soaring to new heights though!

violet ray

oh, i wasn't thinking of anyone in particular...

Felicity

charles wrote:

so called invisible boy
let,s pretend he is
if he stays around

il est possible ou pas, qui sait?

Ali

I would date a silly monkey boy...especially with a sense of humor.
He'd probably drive me crazy after about ten minutes .... but......

Peace.