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FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you got your point across
i'm left here in tears
all that ever was promised
only empty words
i kept to the vows
answered your prayers
always so sure
that you would return
the joy so deserved
you got your woman there
i'm left alone in hell
all that was ever needed
only lying laughter
i kept to the plan
answered your cries
always that sure
that you wanted me
and the love i save
you got your life to yourself
i'm sure i hate you
all that ever meant anything
only piss in my mouth
i joined you in truth
answered with love
always so positive
that you would make good
the wishes and hopes

i can't write about this anymore
fuck you
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Comments

  • Thank you for posting this poem, felicity. The speaker sounds to me like someone who has a lot of love yet to give and will find someone deserving of it.
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    intense.

    funny how raw the thoughts that blade out onto paper or screen can be. Funny how they get to the point where the emotions far overwhelm the abilities of these words to communicate. Funny how when this occurs all we can do is fling our pencil across the room in disgust with ourselves and our subject and our ire, and in acrimonious venom we fume and rant and realize that we are no longer speaking, we are crying.

    no. you're right. :( it isn't funny at all.

    love to you felicity.

    be well.

    seta.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Felicity, this poem of yours, I like it. :)
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