did you see?

FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
did you see those leaping sparks
of varied and brilliant hue
over the sound
pounding with concussion
ground-shaking and
pow boom bam
my eyes lit up
with wondrous awe
hoping your eyes saw
at the same time as mine
what through expression
of chemicals and powder
my heart feels
when i see you
the climbing white sparkles
ascend my spine
as the purple and red
pulsate deeply within
the blue and orange
playfully sprinkle
coolness and warmth
simultaneously
did you see those soaring patterns
elliptical spherical forms
within forms
higher and higher explode
until climaxing with steady speed
the ultimate display
deafens ears and fills the eyes
pounds the chest
and elicits a smile

just for me
only me

special
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Comments

  • malenkostmalenkost Posts: 3
    ahh yes for you!

    i heard them too..
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Very nice Felicity....

    Is this about some guy you met/ seen at a club.....just guessing because of the "ground-shaking" and the "sound pounding"....Anyways some very nice imagery....your heart has wonderful colors.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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