cursed/blessed

Felicity

i'm very lucky indeed
every wish i ever wanted
has come true so far
the way i planned things
it wasn't wrong
just a way to test myself
to see if you'd be there
never meant as a game
but somehow that's your whim
deep inside i thought i knew
it would always exist
as time wore on
so i take my blessings
as they come along
leaving the heart's longing
to another day
those last few wishes
i thought i wanted
you made them so i wouldn't
that was a shock
because i have cried my eyes alone
and nothing changed
i'm still on my own
with people only telling me
that i need help
when what i really need is love
the one promised to me
for all time
why ask me for more?
i've given you everything i could
i want you to give to me now
do it
on the streets
is where you'll find me
buy me a coffee
and talk about music and movies
but i know what you'll be thinking
~~~about my mouth and my breasts
and the intimate words
and how fucking long
we've been waiting for each other
and to just accept it
get me ready then
it's time for real life
and deep love

Righteous Jammer

yes...very nice

grooveamatic

"so I take my blessing
as they come along"


I love these lines. Once again you communicate so much in such limited space. This poem makes me ache, makes me want people and desire places and times. It makes me want to cry, and then shout something oblivious to the world.

Thanks.

i forget

Great read! Thanks for sharing. The final line is my favorite.

Felicity

how sweet of you all.

thanks,cheering secion.