i love you

FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
i love you so MUCH
i love you SO much
I loveYOU so much
i LOVE you so much
I love you
so much

will you never cease to make me laugh
when all seems final
and put away
to the tune of a thousand tears
striking the taut surface
or soft warm skin
you ate your dinner
out of a clear tupperware
with a blue lid
on the bus
you bobbed your head
to the headphone music
and swung a shiny granola bar
from your sweet
soul-patch riding lips
you've been working
taut trapezius muscles
rising up to your sunburnt neck
and lean downy arms
playful flicker
of eye contact
gives you away
every time

I love you so much

for inspiring again
as you promised you would

thank you for the magic
now you know
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  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    remember that song by paul mccartney

    that would be a great cover song by anyone and most likely a number one single if anyone made it one


    such raw bass sound and line

    the greatest chorus of all time i think you just wrote
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    what's wrong with that?

    i'm always disappointed when people want more than just the love someone wants to give.or,more to the point,they expect something more.

    all you need is love,all you want is love,all you'll get is love,as long as you only love in return.put a price or something owed back on it,you've lost the whole idea about unconditional love.

    if you're looking for someone to take care of you,that's a whole different set of rules and regulations.on the other hand,if someone tells you they will always take care of you,be sure you don't misunderstand how.

    trust me.

    can i trust you?
    :)
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Felicity wrote:
    i love you so MUCH
    i love you SO much
    I loveYOU so much
    i LOVE you so much
    I love you
    so much

    will you never cease to make me laugh
    when all seems final
    and put away
    to the tune of a thousand tears
    striking the taut surface
    or soft warm skin
    you ate your dinner
    out of a clear tupperware
    with a blue lid
    on the bus
    you bobbed your head
    to the headphone music
    and swung a shiny granola bar
    from your sweet
    soul-patch riding lips
    you've been working
    taut trapezius muscles
    rising up to your sunburnt neck
    and lean downy arms
    playful flicker
    of eye contact
    gives you away
    every time

    I love you so much

    for inspiring again
    as you promised you would

    thank you for the magic
    now you know


    simple, there is nothing more raw than love
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    Kwyjibo wrote:
    simple, there is nothing more raw than love

    a warm rush.
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    I imagine she's sitting there
    a hundred miles away but not
    she's just down the road
    alone in her empty room
    with her new empty man
    trying to smile
    but can't
    theres a million memories
    that haunt her
    I imagine she wants me back
    not for what we had
    and not for what they don't
    but wants me for what could have been
    when all she sees is black
    I imagine shes crying
    out
    for fingerprints
    to spark the lightning
    thats caused by skin clashing with skin
    And
    I imagine she wishes she were the storm
    again.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    Nast wrote:
    I imagine shes crying
    out
    for fingerprints
    to spark the lightning
    thats caused by skin clashing with skin
    And
    I imagine she wishes she were the storm
    again.

    the muse is teasing and taunting again

    what shall we do?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This poem makes me think of ...... ? :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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