Wonky Carpet Afternoon...

corduroy_veddercorduroy_vedder Posts: 66
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wonky Carpet Afternoon...

Sitting, just sitting..
Yes, in my room.
it ain't that hard hitting
just slightly uneventful
that's all..
although
it did rain
and that was like
listening to...a tap dancer
just
like
it
yes
i admit...
i did manage to read a few chapters
of 'lord of the flies'...eat a salad
eat a chocolate bar
sip some tea
and yes
thats how my time died..
except my time didn't...
the clock...
in my room...
had..stopped
but i looked over to my left
and the other clock said 2.05pm
so my time had died
2.05 on a tuesday afternoon and
the rain had stopped by then
and left a gift of sweet wet grass
aroma....filled my room but
time passed ever more
as i tried to straighten
my wonky carpet
but as always
i failed

Corduroy_Vedder :)
I don't live today.....Maybe tomorrow?-Jimi Hendrix
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Comments

  • Refreshing bit of realism there, Ollie.

    :)
  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    hey stranger!

    :)


    nice to hear some words by you....sounds like you're bumming around on a tuesday like me :) well...i'm supposed to be doing work but with no success....

    it rained for you? maybe it's heading my way then....eek.


    nice to see you ols :)


    *bugs*
  • Hey, thankee guys
    *looks over at the lady naming him 'stranger'....*
    if it aint missus bambi, nice to see you reading my words :D

    speak soon i expect :)

    *Bugs*
    I don't live today.....Maybe tomorrow?-Jimi Hendrix
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