love love lonesome love

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ping pang
the pang of pain
sharpened like a knife
against a stone
you're killing me with every goodbye
sweet misery, sweet tingles
tingle tangle
tangling with pain inside
miles apart and hours between
swing swing the swing of the song
the sad song on my discman
in the sterile gray computer room
technotorture
piano, high pitched songs of missing
songs of lonesome
songs of heartwrenching love
love love love love lonesome love
it doesn't help anything
i'll cry with the piano
pitiful pouting piano
pitiful pouting
pitiful
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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Comments

  • the pain love causes... great topic often ignored.


    beautiful as always jessie
    "Nobody is ever promised tomorrow. Increase the peace."
    ~Juan Azize
  • Originally posted by bisepost
    the pain love causes... great topic often ignored.


    beautiful as always jessie
    thaaaaaank youuuuuuuu :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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