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girl on a hilltop

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
wrapped around those tiny fingers
was a single blade of grass
that entwined with each soft slender digit
the end between her lips...
her almond eyes gazed at the sunset,
at the sky so rich with light...
but the wind picked up and changed,
making her hair wild with passionate fury,
dancing like wild indians around a tribal fire,
it directed her toward the east...
the wind's taking her east...
the wind's taking her east...

the west fades to night...
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    "the wind picked up and changed.. "

    j to the essie is a complex young lady.. i wish her the best.. she is a sweetheart.. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by olderman
    "the wind picked up and changed.. "

    j to the essie is a complex young lady.. i wish her the best.. she is a sweetheart.. :)

    aww my favourite olderman. :) *hug*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    as this fire subsides within my soul
    and the wind howls around me no more
    and a perfect peace comes around me
    a first hand glimpse, at the most beautiful girl
    in the world
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    as this fire subsides within my soul
    and the wind howls around me no more
    and a perfect peace comes around me
    a first hand glimpse, at the most beautiful girl
    in the world

    *eats up your words and says "mmmmm"* :)

    you're so lovely, pat.

    i miss you!
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    *eats up your words and says "mmmmm"* :)

    you're so lovely, pat.

    i miss you!

    well if you miss me, than you should come talk to me !!!!
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    well if you miss me, than you should come talk to me !!!!

    you always say that when i'm not online!! are you gonna be on tonight, sweetpea??? say yes!
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    beautiful words as always jessie. I could envision it right now.

    my dear sweet little sis, you rock!! :D
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    I don't know, I'm done with work so I may be out partying it up w00t, but then again, talking to you would probably be more fun :) I don't know :) probably
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    I don't know, I'm done with work so I may be out partying it up w00t, but then again, talking to you would probably be more fun :) I don't know :) probably

    *pinches your cheeks Aunt Bev style* haha...

    you're so cute! if you go out, have a grrrrrreat time! and if you don't, then i'll be online later. :) so either way... weeee hawwwww. :p haha...

    if you're not online i'll pm you or something

    ~*~*~*~*~

    Nadi. You're precious!! Thanks for the el complimento. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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