you are winter

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this was written at a time when my heart was broken...

baby you
look at me and
i melt like
a snowflake
on your tongue
but then i feel the chill
of the wind
through my body
and even my
heart becomes cold
with each
breath you breathe
on my
warm soul

a snowdrift
covers the warmth
of your being
as you shut me out
in the cold...

i'm turning blue
with the cold
and i'm growing
numb
'cause this blizzard
of emotions
is nothing new...

and all that's left
are the black
icicles
forming underneath
my sparkling eyes...

goodbye...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

but the springtime did come... and now i'm in love... but the winter reminded me of this writing and though i'd see what you all thought... :)

pj lovin',
jessie
of_the_girl
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Jessie...
    i like...
    don't let em break your heart ever again....
    i'm with you...
    been there,
    done that..
    now i'm just a little more careful as to where I spread the love...
    that is matrimonially speaking....
    Keep it all in that sacred heart,
    the sacred soul,
    and the sacred peace of mind....
    rock on.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • Originally posted by Ali
    Jessie...
    i like...
    don't let em break your heart ever again....
    i'm with you...
    been there,
    done that..
    now i'm just a little more careful as to where I spread the love...
    that is matrimonially speaking....
    Keep it all in that sacred heart,
    the sacred soul,
    and the sacred peace of mind....
    rock on.....

    ali... that is so sweet.. really, touching and beautiful and wow... :) thanks a lot :)

    rock on ;)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Ah, the cold always tends to turn you numb for a while. :( Glad the thaw came! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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