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of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm crumbling into peices
with every thought of you
and it's making me feel sick
like i'm rotting rotting rotting
away to the core
of my being
and you're standing over there
and you can't even hear
me screaming
but you always said you'd be here
to hold my hand
when i'm hurt
when i'm rotting
but i'm crumbling into peices
with every thought of you
like i'm rotting rotting rotting
away to the core
of my being
and you're standing over there...
standing way over there
laughing
you've got better things to do
than pick up my
peices.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    keven 33

    will you please clean out your PM box?

    thanks.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    That is beautiful jessie. really, I don't know what else to say. That just sums up the way I feel right now.:(

    Damn robert!! :mad: haha
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by MeddleDeal
    That is beautiful jessie. really, I don't know what else to say. That just sums up the way I feel right now.:(

    Damn robert!! :mad: haha

    aww sweetie I knew you'd understand this!! i love you SO much!

    :love: <--wonder if there's a smiley face for that tee hee
    jessie
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
    Too much rotting going on in here.
    I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

    Sperm, It's in you to give.




    I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    aww sweetie I knew you'd understand this!! i love you SO much!

    :love: <--wonder if there's a smiley face for that tee hee
    jessie

    I love you a HELLA of a lot sweetie!! :)

    Aww too cute w/the love smiles, I wish there was one, but hey, at least it is there:D
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    Too much rotting going on in here.

    too much, you can't escape it
    i can't help if i feel rotten
    a lot lately
    "too much rotting going on in here"
    well i can't help
    all this wasting away...
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • FunkeRFunkeR Posts: 105
    And why is it everyone in this board replies in some strange poetic form?
    I say what I want, when I want. It's freedom of fucking speech.

    Sperm, It's in you to give.




    I used to have something to say... now I'm just a caricature of who I was... it's sad, that the one piece of me I wanted for you, is nothing but a misrepresentation of everything I am.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    And why is it everyone in this board replies in some strange poetic form?

    becuzzz
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • theVerbToTrusttheVerbToTrust Posts: 33
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    And why is it everyone in this board replies in some strange poetic form?

    i dont know
    the poem about snow
    is lurking
    i try to like you
    FunkeR
    and it is easy
    to fail
    i wish i was the verb "to trust" and never let you down

    tremorvoid - "id rather you smashed your member into me instead"
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by theVerbToTrust
    i dont know
    the poem about snow
    is lurking
    i try to like you
    FunkeR
    and it is easy
    to fail

    i like
    your style
    verb
    and i know
    exactly
    how you feel
    about the
    Funky one.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    jessie,
    ur too awesome
    my dear
    tooo awesome :)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • casper leblanccasper leblanc Posts: 1,246
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    And why is it everyone in this board replies in some strange poetic form?

    lol, I think it, you, of course, say it :D

    and on a not so side note: Jessie, you have one of the most beautiful smiles I have ever seen - and it was only on pics, not even in real life - so if anything, don't let that go rotten okay?
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Tru verilie we canne replie in style
    Elizabethane Englischemenne woulde spoute;
    Iambicke, pentametricke alle the while
    And alwayse with a charme that's ours to floute.
    Sirre FunkRe, iffe you reade of Jakobsonne
    on semiotickes ande deep structures, you'de
    acclaime how poesie sayse in wordes of one
    what tomes of prose which rambles never coulde:
    For poesie workes alonge the verticale
    axis of communicationne and
    prose juste flatlines. Verse winnes by a mile!
    Before I lose my threadde, lette me commende
    Dearre Jessie forre her poem. She can lifte
    the veile from truthe withe her poeticke gifte.

    :)
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by FunkeR
    And why is it everyone in this board replies in some strange poetic form?
    um cause maybe we are inspired
    and jess-thang is one of our beautiful muses :)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Tru verilie we canne replie in style
    Elizabethane Englischemenne woulde spoute;
    Iambicke, pentametricke alle the while
    And alwayse with a charme that's ours to floute.
    Sirre FunkRe, iffe you reade of Jakobsonne
    on semiotickes ande deep structures, you'de
    acclaime how poesie sayse in wordes of one
    what tomes of prose which rambles never coulde:
    For poesie workes alonge the verticale
    axis of communicationne and
    prose juste flatlines. Verse winnes by a mile!
    Before I lose my threadde, lette me commende
    Dearre Jessie forre her poem. She can lifte
    the veile from truthe withe her poeticke gifte.

    :)
    yah!! what he said!! :p

    (fpc- ur my idol :D)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • casper leblanccasper leblanc Posts: 1,246
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    iffe you reade of Jakobsonne
    on semiotickes ande deep structures, you'de
    acclaime how poesie sayse in wordes of one
    what tomes of prose which rambles never coulde:
    For poesie workes alonge the verticale
    axis of communicationne and
    prose juste flatlines.

    Now that's just you being biased Finsburry ;)

    I personally find a lot more meaning in some prose than I ever will in pure poetry
  • SchlitzSchlitz Posts: 141
    Very good Jessie! I see you have quite a good talent here as well sass!
    i have to remain at top sassiness, even though my inner sass is struggling
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Aww thanks everybodee!

    ~*~*~*~

    And Schlitz!!! Did I ever tell you how you inspired me with your sassy word sass??

    On my dorm room door, we have one of those dry-erase boards... and it says

    AuBrie and Jessica:
    We put the "ass" in "sass"!!

    I figured you'd be proud. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by pearlwax
    lol, I think it, you, of course, say it :D

    and on a not so side note: Jessie, you have one of the most beautiful smiles I have ever seen - and it was only on pics, not even in real life - so if anything, don't let that go rotten okay?

    *smiles really really BIG for pearlwax*

    thanks, dearie :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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