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you make me feel new

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i like to sigh and feel the relief in my chest
and you make me do it every day
you make me sigh with every smile
and it's always a new breath
clean and fresh
and you make me sigh
you make me sigh every day
i like to sigh
it's a relief in my chest
just about
where my heart is.
:)
<3
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Very effective repetition here...it doesn't even feel like repetition. Cool!
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