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minty fresh me

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I can be
your mint on your
pillow
to sweeten your
sour
to brighten your night
I can be
your mint on your
pillow
to make you feel
fresh
again
:):)
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • who's_pearljam?who's_pearljam? Posts: 2,104
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    I can be
    your mint on your
    pillow
    to sweeten your
    sour
    to brighten your night
    I can be
    your mint on your
    pillow
    to make you feel
    fresh
    again
    :):)

    How short, how sweet!:D
    Be kind, man
    Don't be mankind. ~Captain Beefheart
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by who's_pearljam?
    How short, how sweet!:D
    Thank ya! :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Thank you Kevin...

    and about the vague comment...

    it's a fair judgment...
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    you'll understand, one day you'll see
    that any man that goes to bed at night
    with your head on his pillow
    is a lucky man indeed
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • HoorayForHumansHoorayForHumans Posts: 151
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    you'll understand, one day you'll see
    that any man that goes to bed at night
    with your head on his pillow
    is a lucky man indeed
    indeed.
    this heart's on fire
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    you'll understand, one day you'll see
    that any man that goes to bed at night
    with your head on his pillow
    is a lucky man indeed

    That was so great, Pat... thanks for the words. They really made me smile real big. :D <--- kinda like that, only not as weird... haha

    :)Thanks again for all your kindness. You're a wonderful person.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by HoorayForHumans
    indeed.

    AND YOU!!!

    I <3 you. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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