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something's wrong

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there's a feeling in my stomache
a mixture of happiness excitement love
and a feeling left there
that makes me want to throw up
i can feel the oceans starting in my eyes
and i blink and i blink
trying to beckon them away
but it's too late..
there's a leak
i am crying
softly, silently

sicksicksick
deep deep down in my tummy
my belly
hurts so bad
and i'm trying so hard not to cry
i'm happy i'm sad
i'm confused
and angry that i'm not where
i'm supposed to be

i'm not where i'm supposed to be
i'm sick i'm tired
and i'm alone
and i'm in the wrong place
at the wrong time

and you
out of reach
you speak

yet i smile
with this sicksicksick feeling
resting in the pits
of my tumtum

what the fuck is wrong with me?

oh i'm going to be sick...
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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Comments

  • HoorayForHumansHoorayForHumans Posts: 151
    *hugs*

    <3
    this heart's on fire
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    I love you.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    I wish I had words for you
    words that would uplift
    words that would make you better soon

    but I don't have a damn thing to say
    I feel like I should be doing something
    so why am I walking away

    you'll feel better when you forget
    forget all about this,
    forget all about it and live

    I know its not easy
    its actually quite hard
    but know when your feet give out
    I will always take your arm
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    <3<3<3

    Ya never have failed to make me smile, Pat. Not once.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    now if I could only see the results in person
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    now if I could only see the results in person

    :) aww yeah i know!
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • stickboystickboy Posts: 2,981
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    :) aww yeah i know!
    much love girl <3<3<3. Feel better, ok?
    Aah, fuck it, I’m just gonna go home, turn on the fuckin’ TV...
    Watch the nightly news and drink a beer...
    Like I could even change the world, yeah right...
    ************************************
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