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of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it's all gonna be
kinda okay
it's all gonna be
another truce
in this war
it's all gonna be
only kinda okay
kinda
kinda
kinda okay
why would you want anything
to be
kinda okay?
kinda?
kinda?
why would you want us
to be
just kinda
of anything....???
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    it'll all be really ok,
    for serious
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    for cereal? thanks pat :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Hey, of_the_girl/Jessie! You know I'm in England? Well, on my Board forums home page is a list of today's birthdays, and I saw yours! So, somewhere in the world right now, it's your birthday! Many happy returns and best wishes to you!

    Finsbury
    :)
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    hee hee thanks so much, Finsbury!! Yeah, my b-day is the 21st, so it's not the 21st yet here... but it means a ton to me!!!

    Love,
    Jessie
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    ok this inspired me so much I just recorded a guitar, vocal, and heh drums, for this poem. I can delete it if you want, but I'd way rather send it to you
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    ok this inspired me so much I just recorded a guitar, vocal, and heh drums, for this poem. I can delete it if you want, but I'd way rather send it to you

    This was the best birthday present in the world. :) Thanks so much, Pat. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    .
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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