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been a long time....

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i wish instead of rain drops
tapping at my window
it was you
arrived to take me away

we could run away together
beneath the purple black sky
with sprinkles of silver


c'mon c'mon
come tap on my window

shove fear aside and drive to my house
and run through the droplets
and kneel in the rocks

tap tap tap
a few times so i know you're just not
the rain

tap for me
come tap
tap... for me!
tap my window
and rescue me.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • PrettyNoosePrettyNoose Posts: 146
    aww that was really nice :)
    i loved -
    "we could run away together
    beneath the purple black sky
    with sprinkles of silver"
    her life was saved by Rock 'n' Roll
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    beautiful!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • tracingdaisiestracingdaisies Posts: 40
    that made me think of the 'come to my window' melissa etheridge song. :)
    I wish I was a Democrat
    One that had a chance to win
    I wish I was a Republican
    But would I be a human being?
    --from 'Wishlist,' 7/6/03, Philadelphia

    http://www.livejournal.com/users/tracingdaisies
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    i wish instead of rain drops
    tapping at my window
    it was you
    arrived to take me away

    we could run away together
    beneath the purple black sky
    with sprinkles of silver


    c'mon c'mon
    come tap on my window

    shove fear aside and drive to my house
    and run through the droplets
    and kneel in the rocks

    tap tap tap
    a few times so i know you're just not
    the rain

    tap for me
    come tap
    tap... for me!
    tap my window
    and rescue me.

    I love this one. :)
  • i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    These thoughts you share so eloquently, I'm tuned into.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i could be there in 28 minutes or so...

    nice jessie, really nice
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    ur imagery is absoluthing lovely jess

    we could run away together
    beneath the purple black sky
    with sprinkles of silver

    -love it

    and those happened to me my fave contrasts when i was in hs
    still is now after reading that :D
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Thanks so much to all of you. I love verbal hugs.. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    and ruby pie! your sig!! i love you!!!!!! :D

    ~sisterkisses for you!~
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • stickboystickboy Posts: 2,981
    finally!
    ;)
    :D:D
    I needed that! ;)
    Aah, fuck it, I’m just gonna go home, turn on the fuckin’ TV...
    Watch the nightly news and drink a beer...
    Like I could even change the world, yeah right...
    ************************************
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