just more questions... it's always questions with me...

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
nothing more
than a tear
in a cold lonely room
and a cloudy day
to make a pretty smile
turn into a knowing
frown

softly sinking
and cuddling herself
to keep warm

she'll close her
eyes
and pretend
she's on a cloud
someplace
looking around
and down
and smiling
at children
playing in a field
of sunflowers

or else
she'll just pretend
her arms
that keep herself warm
are someone
else's

it's raining
it's springtime
but where are the
flowers?
where is the
warmth?
where is
everybody?
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • *hugs*

    Last night I fell asleep with my window open, and my bed is under my window. I woke up and my face was wet from it raining. I've felt very lonely lately. It was like the rain provided my tears because I'm unable to cry because of my loss of feelings for anything anymore.

    I don't know if that really had anything to do with what you wrote, but that's what it made me think of when I read it.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by AndyManderson
    *hugs*

    Last night I fell asleep with my window open, and my bed is under my window. I woke up and my face was wet from it raining. I've felt very lonely lately. It was like the rain provided my tears because I'm unable to cry because of my loss of feelings for anything anymore.

    I don't know if that really had anything to do with what you wrote, but that's what it made me think of when I read it.
    *hugs back*

    Andy, you really hit it on the head. Lonliness. In any colour/flavour/texture... that's all I was really getting at. So yes, what you said definitely kept with my theme.

    I'm sorry you're sad. I'm sorry anyone's sad. I'm even sorry *I'm* sad, however selfsish that may be. I guess I'll continue finding the poetry in it though, and at least that's something great and beautiful.

    Smile once for me, though, kay? :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    What are you guys sad about.....lets wallow in sadness together
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by nailz100
    What are you guys sad about.....lets wallow in sadness together

    let's not wallow in it though... let's embrace each other, and keep each other company, and sing a sad song or something... that, to me, is a much more beautiful use of sadness. :) <-- look, the thought of it even produced a smile!!

    *hands everyone a flower*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    What song shall we sing?
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    hrmmmm... i'm not sure.... Off He Goes was just playing in my discman, til my battery went dead. How bout that one?
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I'm not sure how sad of a song that is. Maybe a better choice would be Black or The Reason.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by nailz100
    I'm not sure how sad of a song that is. Maybe a better choice would be Black or The Reason.

    not Black. that's too sad. and I suppose I wasn't going for sad as much.

    But The Reason has balance. Let's sing that. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    And the reason is you........and the reason is Y...O...UUUU
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • bump
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • I REALLY like this one Jessie. Been feeling that way myself all too often here lately. I just wanna get over it, it meaning him, & get on with my life. I hate feeling this way. Although I would assume most people do.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Awww girlie, here's hoping to warmth in your heart very soon.

    Love,
    Jessie
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Originally posted by of_the_girl
    Awww girlie, here's hoping to warmth in your heart very soon.

    Love,
    Jessie
    Thank you sweetie! I'm sure as hell hoping for that too.
    Sounds like you could use a little yourself. ((((((Big hug))))))
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by VedderGirl27
    Thank you sweetie! I'm sure as hell hoping for that too.
    Sounds like you could use a little yourself. ((((((Big hug))))))
    aww!! yay! i love hugs, and your big hug really really made me feel all cozy inside. :)

    Love,
    Jessie :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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