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not my best, but i'm too happy to try... heehee

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
every inch of my body
is aching for your lips
and your fingers

gently

your soft self
and my little figure
tangling limbs

you're so warm

i'll cover you in kisses
and you'll cover me up too
with your wet lip embraces

so soft

you're beautiful, so beautiful
the most perfect person for me
we'll fit together well

and i swear i'll never love anyone else this way
because i'll love you for the rest of my life..

forever

(i promise :))
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    take care
    young man
    take extra care
    of our J to the essie

    she's exposed her soul
    this lovely girl
    has been so real

    give an extra measure
    of love
    for our lady of poesy..

    lovely to see you again my friend
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    :) Warm and positive stuff. :)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I dig it. Thanks.
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    ;)
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Aw Olderman that was lovely. :) Thanks much.

    ~~*~~*~~*~~

    Fins, thanks to you as well.
    Thanks also go to groovematic.

    I'm just really really happy, that's all. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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