a poem! by me! weee!

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
:D

from out the shadows you call to me
cold breath stirring in my soul
so terrible
so sinister
breathing clouds into the sky
with your words of suspicion (sp?)
but my sun is brighter than your fog
my sun is brighter than your fog
my sun is brighter than your fog
you'll never pour rain from my sky
from out the shadows you call to me
but i'm too good to hear it...
i'm lovely
you're not
i'm too good to hear your sadsongs
your madsongs
your songs of jealousy
get out of my sky
my sun's brighter than your fog

~*~*~*~*~


Huzzah! :D
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • :)

    The sun, she rises, and burns off the surrounding fog!




    Hooray! Hooray! Calloo! Callay! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    How do you do you change the color of the words in a post?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Originally posted by Bibliobella
    How do you do you change the color of the words in a post?

    You take one of these guys -> [ <- then, type ->color=blue<-, then the other -> ] <-, type the text, then, -> [ <- then type
    -> /color <-, then -> ] <-

    BLUE Or, just use the quote feature and quote this post and it will show it to you which is probably much simpler than trying to follow my directions! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Great poem, Jessie!

    Well, Bibliobella, type this:

    [colour=red]your poem[/colour]

    except, where I said "colour", just type the American spelling, color. I substituted the phrase colour for color because if I wrote color in those brackets if would automatically do this.

    :)
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Thanks!!!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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