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of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it's not your fault
i'm inside myself drowning so please
don't worry about my most recent crumbling
my withering
my collapsing
my most recent falling out...
don't try and pick up my pieces
you have pieces of your own to hold together
but you can keep loving me if you want
and that's the glue that'll help me
put myself back together...








don't worry.
i'll be okay.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    :( sweetie, that is SO touching...i swear, whenever you write, it seems that you speak not only for yourself, but for everyone else out there who can identify w/this poem.

    *HUGS*

    love you baby sis.:)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by MeddleDeal
    :( sweetie, that is SO touching...i swear, whenever you write, it seems that you speak not only for yourself, but for everyone else out there who can identify w/this poem.

    *HUGS*

    love you baby sis.:)

    thanks nadi pie!!! i looove youuu!! thanks for the comment in my livejournal my love. you're the sweetest sugar cube in the bowl!! :D hee heeeee

    *HUUUUGS*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    you are SO welcome little sis:)
    awww shucks!! you are too damn sweet girl. I hope we can meet some sunny day:)

    *HUGS*
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by MeddleDeal
    you are SO welcome little sis:)
    awww shucks!! you are too damn sweet girl. I hope we can meet some sunny day:)

    *HUGS*

    and if it rains that day we'll dance in it!! :D we can be each others' sunshine then.

    *giggling with you at the thought*

    yeah, we can dance in the rain and sing and be silly together... and then we can go have iced lattes and listen to music and then we can watch PJ dvds and swoon at our chosen ones :D

    i love you girl... best sis ever, you are! :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    and if it rains that day we'll dance in it!! :D we can be each others' sunshine then.

    *giggling with you at the thought*

    yeah, we can dance in the rain and sing and be silly together... and then we can go have iced lattes and listen to music and then we can watch PJ dvds and swoon at our chosen ones :D

    i love you girl... best sis ever, you are! :D


    awww sweetie, you know you are making me blush as we speak :p you are TOO wonderful of a great little sis:)

    and YES, we shall dance in the rain holding hands. YEA!!

    and you are the BEST little sis in the world my dear!! I love ya!!
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    *giggling more* we're cute! *holds your hand*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    teehee

    you are such a riot jessie!! I hope you are doing fine my dear sis:)

    I miss ya muchos!!! :(
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by MeddleDeal
    teehee

    you are such a riot jessie!! I hope you are doing fine my dear sis:)

    I miss ya muchos!!! :(

    well i am actually doing much better... a friend of mine (Becki.. the one who left those REALLLLY long comments) took me out and we had food and coffed and we talked for two hours at this diner. and it realllly helped A LOT. i feel so much better. plus all that love i got from you and the others.

    sometimes it takes a tragedy to know who your real friends are. but it's all worth it.

    love to you,
    jessie

    ps: i miss you muches and bunches!! :(
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    aww that is great sweetie...I am glad that your friend was there and that is why they are there for you:)

    and yes I agree w/you, it really does have to take something to make you see who are your real friends. :D

    and sis, we ARE CUTE together! teehee. maybe you should superimposed a pic of you and me together! hahahaha since we haven't taken a pic together! :)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    "while the moon does its division you're buried below
    and you're coming up roses everywhere you go
    red roses follow
    the things that you tell yourself
    they'll kill you in time
    you cold white brother alive in your blood
    spinning in the night sky
    while the moon does its division you're buried below
    and you're coming up roses everywhere you go
    red roses
    so you got in a kind of trouble that nobody knows
    and you're coming up roses everywhere you go
    red roses"
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    aw pat thanks sweetie.. i love that song :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    What Happened Jess?
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by nailz100
    What Happened Jess?

    it's better now... don't worry :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    Girl, thanks for sharing your poetry w/us...you know I always love reading them :)

    *HUGS to my favorite little sis*
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    I'm glad to hear you are doing better Jessie. Rain should not fall from the eyes of somebody with that beautiful of a heart.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    nailz!! that was such a lovely thing for you to say. :) thanks so much for always being such a great friend.

    and nadia... i love you so much sis!! <333 i'm glad you love reading my stuff. it's just more pieces of me. pieces of me i'm glad you like! love you to bits,
    jessie
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • AsPrivilegedAsAWhoreAsPrivilegedAsAWhore Posts: 109
    i like this one a lot jessie:)

    good job
    They filled me full of drink
    And led me round the rooms
    Naked and cold and grinning
    Until everything went black
    And I came down spinning
    I awoke so drunk and full of rage
    That I could hardly speak
    A fag in a whale bone corset
    Draping his dick across my cheek
    And its into the shame
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    "you smile at me in total defiance of all decency
    you've got it down to a science, that innocent look
    you've got it practiced real good
    but i know you'd kill me if you could stand the sight of blood"
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by AsPrivilegedAsAWhore
    i like this one a lot jessie:)

    good job

    aww thanks erin :) such a comment from you shall be cherished!!

    :D

    and pat... *sigh* you f-in rawk... i can't say that enough. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Hey girl, move a little closer.
    You're Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush

    Modern medicine falls short of your complaints
    Ooh, try a little harder
    You're moving in circles,
    won't you dilate
    Baby try
    Hey girl, move a little closer
    'Cause, you're Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush

    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush, eye to eye
    Too shy shy
    Hush hush
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    LOL PAT!!! I heart youuuu!!! :D:D:D

    now that song is stuck in my head. :p
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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