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Kwy to the jibo

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pat oh pat
you should write more...
oh yeahhhh
pat oh pat you should write moooooreeee!!
i miss talking to youuuuuu
'cause you're funny and you're neatoooooo
and i hope i can hug you one dayyyy
oh yeahhhh!!
paaaaat!
yeah pat i'm gonna hug you one dayyy!!

**i wrote that little song for you pat :D**
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    heheh thanks jessie, this made my night
    but I have to go to bed now cause I have to get up early

    I'll try to be online more :) but here ya go for now :)

    strumming,strumming,strumming my guitar
    hours passing by without a single thought
    thinking too much is tearing me apart

    sleep is the only solace for a tired body
    but my mind stays a wake, it refuses to sleep
    and I'm stuck here counting my demons
    instead of counting sheep
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    A snowflake landed in your hair
    it never melted, its still there.
    And frost on grass, beneath our feet
    the soles can't melt it, and neither can we
    the stars they shone a perfect light
    but I couldn't look, away from your eyes

    reminds me of the poignant scene near the end of the crap film Rules of Attraction.....where the snowflakes are falling etc....snow is so....sooooooooooooooooooo.......sosssssssssssssoooooooooooperfect....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    heheh thanks jessie, this made my night
    but I have to go to bed now cause I have to get up early

    I'll try to be online more :) but here ya go for now :)

    strumming,strumming,strumming my guitar
    hours passing by without a single thought
    thinking too much is tearing me apart

    sleep is the only solace for a tired body
    but my mind stays a wake, it refuses to sleep
    and I'm stuck here counting my demons
    instead of counting sheep

    'bout time :D thanks for giving me something to read!!! i miss your heartbreakingly beautiful poetry. well, not just that poetry, but ALL your poetry. i know i sound like any other person but i hope you can feel the genuineness :D

    Sending you warm thoughts, smiles, and robot moves,
    Jessie :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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