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she wins

of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she only dances at night
when she knows no one's watching
then she tiptoes to bed
and giggles to herself


"no one saw me but the stars"
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • ForeverAJammerForeverAJammer Posts: 116
    that was so great.....



    so feminine .... so simple


    i loved it ..thanks



    that was so me lol
    i miss you already...


  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by ForeverAJammer
    that was so great.....



    so feminine .... so simple


    i loved it ..thanks



    that was so me lol

    thanks sweetpea :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • ForeverAJammerForeverAJammer Posts: 116
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    thanks sweetpea :)


    no prob:) i also love the title.... she wins... something just strikes me about it...


    u better keep puttin stuff up little lady ;D
    i miss you already...


  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by ForeverAJammer
    no prob:) i also love the title.... she wins... something just strikes me about it...


    u better keep puttin stuff up little lady ;D

    otayyy :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • ForeverAJammerForeverAJammer Posts: 116
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    otayyy :D


    ;)
    i miss you already...


  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    someone's always watching.....hehehehehehe.....somewhere?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by ISN
    someone's always watching.....hehehehehehe.....somewhere?

    :p
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Wow that's really good! Love the short simple stuff so much better than the hefty stuff. Espescially when you can put accross tha much meaning with just a few lines.

    If thats clearly feminine, than call me a woman! (Mrs Pyjama would do...)
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • A HitchHiker PoetA HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    This poem made my smile
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Mr Pyjama
    Wow that's really good! Love the short simple stuff so much better than the hefty stuff. Espescially when you can put accross tha much meaning with just a few lines.

    If thats clearly feminine, than call me a woman! (Mrs Pyjama would do...)

    Thanks Pyjama!! :D I like the shorter stuff too. I write better in small doses, I think. Otherwise I tend to go off on really horrible tangents. :p Glad you appreciate it. :)

    And hey! You! Hitchhiker Poet!

    Thanks :) I'm glad it made you smile. :) Makes me smile as well.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    of_the_gril....you're teh funnneeeee!!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Just postiing to keep this great piece of poetry high on the board...
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by ISN
    of_the_gril....you're teh funnneeeee!!!!!

    :p x ten.


    weeeeeeee




    ~*~

    thanks again, pyjama :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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