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of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
bleh.

nevermind.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    bleh.

    nevermind.

    you ok?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by violet ray
    you ok?

    well... i didn't used to be okay. not last night. things weren't going well with a guy. and i felt funny. like he was about to tell me something bad.

    but then... i realized i was being silly. but only after I wrote the poem. and i didn't want him to see it.. besides, the poem wasn't even that great. i'm sure i'll make *something* out of this thread, so as not to waste bandwidth...

    but thanks for the concern. it was a violet ray of sunshine. :p hee heeeeee

    :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    well... i didn't used to be okay. not last night. things weren't going well with a guy. and i felt funny. like he was about to tell me something bad.

    but then... i realized i was being silly. but only after I wrote the poem. and i didn't want him to see it.. besides, the poem wasn't even that great. i'm sure i'll make *something* out of this thread, so as not to waste bandwidth...

    but thanks for the concern. it was a violet ray of sunshine. :p hee heeeeee

    :)

    i know the feeling...
    i'm glad it turned out ok though
    :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by violet ray
    i know the feeling...
    i'm glad it turned out ok though
    :)

    aww i'm glad it turned out okay too!! :) grazi, once again, for the concern.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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