8/31/04 * 8:30am * north point, block island

eddies grrleddies grrl Posts: 509
gray sea rolling in
over and over the song
repeats
and the satisfying gurgle
of water over stone
changes my breathing
and the cycle feels
like my blood
essential
mysterious
asserting its power

a quiet storm rained down
last night
as the house slept
but not me
not all night
because my blood was out here
breaking against stone
waiting
for morning
Life is the riddle
Of which we're caught in the middle.
A couple of lucky ones
Tangled up in too much love
~cowboy junkies
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  • my2handsmy2hands Posts: 17,117
    gray sea rolling in
    over and over the song
    repeats
    and the satisfying gurgle
    of water over stone
    changes my breathing
    and the cycle feels
    like my blood
    essential
    mysterious
    asserting its power

    a quiet storm rained down
    last night
    as the house slept
    but not me
    not all night
    because my blood was out here
    breaking against stone
    waiting
    for morning


    this is really good grrl... it is funny how the ocean and the earths edge bring about powerful feelings of being alive, and a sense of connection

    very good :)
  • eddies grrleddies grrl Posts: 509
    thank you! :)
    Life is the riddle
    Of which we're caught in the middle.
    A couple of lucky ones
    Tangled up in too much love
    ~cowboy junkies
  • my2handsmy2hands Posts: 17,117
    thank you! :)

    no, thank you for sharing :D
  • brilliant!...simply beautiful :)
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