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AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Amaterasu:

    That was a beautifully human pome, as Kerouac would have said.

    I welled up some as I feel very close to this piece, it is a section of my life as well.

    I believe that as an apology and statement of opened flood gates it suffices to a T. It is rendered with soul and whomever it is addressed to would indeed be blind not to see it.

    i wish you the best and I appreciate very much the heart it took to post this.

    Luck.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
    A

    i thought for a sec that i could actually see your heart and brain blood in the words here, everyone share they diary


    let your love light shine
    fly free



    make sure you study for you final
    convicted
  • terminal velocityterminal velocity Posts: 73
    fuckin' awesome.
    wind howls through our new haircuts
    the water rushes 'round
    heaven knows there's not one thing left to say
  • loveandrew-woodloveandrew-wood Posts: 131
    i feel you completely here, a lot of the questions in your words are close to my soul in so much that i dont even understand what you mean or what you are trying to articulate

    i do know that this is very good work and ya should write an album cause i love ya

    in jesus name
    later
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