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Manipulation in the bud...

AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • JerramJerram Posts: 41
    This has a nice rhythm that would work well in spoken word...
    "I wish I were a messenger and all the news was good" - E.V.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Manipulator

    I never said now
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    I never said that what I said was true
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    I never said that what I said was true
    Real strong now- Manipulated
    Real strong now
    Real strong now
    I never said now
    Why don't you sit down?
    I never said now
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    I never said that what I said was true
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    I never said that what I said was true
    Real strong now- Manipulated
    Real strong now
    Real strong now- Manipulated
    Real strong now
    Real strong now
    I never said now
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    I never said that what I said was true
    I never said that what I said was true
    Real strong now- Manipulated
    Real strong now
    Real strong now
    Real strong now- Manipulated
    Real strong now
    Real strong now
    I never said I wouldn't lie to you
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Oh did I tell you he likes to do as he will
    thats okay I do too
    why fight my friend when you could win
    all the love that could have been
    is looking out for whats within
    well it's a game he likes to play
    called truth or pray
    where he hides in his words
    where the lie comes in spurts
    over and over the fall of heaven
    lands on it's feet ground in earth
    grind grind smack push shove
    you think thats a display of love?
    Well you got your heaven here on earth
    too bad if you don't like it
    it's called the truth be known
    stand up on your own
    Then test the manipulator.

    imo....that's the best you've ever written.....it's got pedigree.....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    Originally posted by ISN
    imo....that's the best you've ever written.....it's got pedigree.....:)

    I second that :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    I just caught this. This is good.
  • Cree NationsCree Nations Posts: 2,247
    Originally posted by Amaterasu
    Oh did I tell you he likes to do as he will
    thats okay I do too
    why fight my friend when you could win
    all the love that could have been
    is looking out for whats within
    well it's a game he likes to play
    called truth or pray
    where he hides in his words
    where the lie comes in spurts
    over and over the fall of heaven
    lands on it's feet ground in earth
    grind grind smack push shove
    you think thats a display of love?
    Well you got your heaven here on earth
    too bad if you don't like it
    it's called the truth be known
    stand up on your own
    Then test the manipulator.

    good stuff, really good stuff
    >>>>
    >
    ...a lover and a fighter.
    "I'm at least half a bum" Rocky Balboa

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